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Sunday, March 2, 2014

Meow Ruff: A Story in Concrete Poetry

Sidman, Joyce. 2006. Meow Ruff: A Story in Concrete Poetry.  Ill. by Michelle Berg.  Boston: Houghton Mifflin Harcourt Publishing Co.  ISBN 9780618448944
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Summary
Meow Ruff:  A Story in Concrete Poetry tells the story of an adventurous friendship between a dog and an abandoned cat.  Meow Ruff:  A Story in Concrete Poetry is intended for children in grades K-3. 

Quality and Appeal
Meow Ruff:  A Story in Concrete Poetry (as the title conveys) is entirely written in through concrete poetic form.  Concrete poetry, also known as a shape poetry, refers to poems which are arranged in a manner that visually depicts shapes often related in subject matter to the poems. 
In all honesty, I hated this book.  The content was difficult to follow as the concrete poems do not follow normal reading patterns (for example, left to right, top to bottom).  Often times, I would read a stanza after another as I tried to navigate the page but there was no connection and this only created a disjointed reading experience where I eventually almost felt nauseous.  I had to read and reread several times before I could even grasp the content in one poem, and then I would have to begin my journey over to understand the entire page.  Consider this:  I have been reading for 20+ years, how will beginning readers fare? 
Perhaps, if each element on the page was singled out, the imagery and detail is actually quite interesting.  However, with so much going on, the confusion outweighs and interest in delving deeper.  The saddest element is the illustration.  While beautiful and cute, the illustrations only complicate the process as words are camouflaged due to poor contrast. 

Awards and/or Mentions
Won Minnesota Book Award in 2007
Spotlight Poem
(Poem written in the shape of a cloud)                
Plump
Bright Dome
Of Sugar White
Sky-Muffin
This poem could be used to introduce adjectives for younger readers.  Children can be invited to construct poems about everyday items with single words. 

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Follow Follow: A Book of Reverso Poems

Singer, Marilyn. 2013. Follow Follow: A Book of Reverso Poems.  Ill. by Josee Masse.  New York: Penguin Group.  ISBN 9780803737693
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Summary
Follow Follow: A Book of Reverso Poems is a poetry picture book on popular fairy tales (such as the Turtle and the Hare, Thumbelina, and the Three Little Pigs) and serves as a companion to its predecessor, Mirror Mirror, also by Marilyn Singer.  Follow Follow: A Book of Reverso Poems is intended for children in grades 1-5. 

Quality and Appeal
Reverso poetry is a term coined by author, Marilyn Singer, to describe the unique and clever way in which she writes a poem that reads one way when being read top down and then switches meaning when read from bottom to top with only changes in punctuation and capitalization.  Of the fourteen poems in this book, the reverse version is almost always completely different than the meaning in the first poem (see below Spotlight Poem). 

While this is a form I was unfamiliar with before I picked up Follow Follow: A Book of Reverso Poems, it was an enjoyable read.  Singer manages to create word 'magic'...  a characteristic only found in authors who really understand their craft.  Both poems are shown on the page so that young readers do not have to struggle with physically reading in an unconventional manner.  Masse couples this interesting poetic form with bold illustrations also parallel in nature which only strengthen the vast difference between each poem’s reversed partners. 

Although the target audience for this book is children in grades K-3, older children may get a kick out of the wordplay. 

Spotlight Poem
                                                                    Birthday Suit
Behold his glorious majesty:
me.
Who dares say he drained the treasury
on
nothing?
Ha!
This emperor has
sublime taste in finery!
Only a fool could fail to see. 

Only a fool could fail to see.
Sublime taste in finery?
This emperor has –
ha! –
nothing
on!
Who dares say he drained the treasury?
Me.
Behold his glorious majesty!

This poem could be used to introduce the basics of wordplay when writing.  Children should be invited to write their own reverse poems which will instill an understanding of semantics and how words work together. 
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Words With Wings

Grimes, Nikki. 2013. Words With Wings.  Homesdale: Wordsong.  ISBN 9781590789858
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Summary
Words With Wings follows young poet and protagonist, Gabby, as she maneuvers through a divorce, moving to a new school, and meeting new friends while attempting to control her daydreaming.  Words With Wings is a verse novel targeted towards children in grades 3-8.

Quality and Appeal
Grimes manages to weave a variety of poetic devices through each poem as readers get to know Gabby.  Page by page, vivid imagery details Gabby’s daily happenings and daydreams while rhythmic rhyming creates a pattern of confidence.  The poems work together to slowly and carefully reveal more and more about Gabby but in a truly impactful and inspirational manner but still allow Gabby to sound like a child.  The adolescent voice secures interest from the targeted audience.  The poetry dances between real life experiences and her daydreams.  The font selected for the real life plane is formal and tightly collected on the page while daydreams are characterized by a more juvenile and playful font and arrangement.

Readers will also find that  Gabby is teased by others for being “weird” because she is misunderstood and different  This free verse novel will provide encouragement for children who can relate to Gabby.   Words With Wings also serves as a “call to arms” for parents and teachers.  Like Gabby’s teacher, rather than attempting to redirect quieter and introverted children, identifying an area of interest where creative energy can be harnessed creates a platform for a child’s growth.

Awards and/or Mentions
Won American Library Association’s Notable Books for Children in 2014
Honor Book – Coretta Scott King Award 2014

Spotlight Poem
Willow
There’s this one kid, David
plants himself in
the back of the room,
hair hanging over his desk
like a willow.
He talks even
less than me.
                                                                   I wonder why.                        

This poem could be used to introduce simile, metaphors and even personification.  Students can be invited to craft poetry describing themselves in an unconventional manner.

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